OUGD505 - Type session - concertina

For the purpose of the workshops, we have done a mini crit on each others work. My feedback is below, based on work done to date on the 16 page booklet.



Crit feedback

Make a physical copy of it.
Make the pop out sections only part of the document, no the main focus.
Create like the actual invites.
Keep the same detail in the content, but ensure legibility
Make it interesting
Make space for foiling etc

Work from my peers

Having the white space allows for more imagery or simply to increase the legibility of a large amount of body copy. Decreasing the point size has kept as much information as possible but allowed the user to have a break from reading large amounts of copy.

Here is the new layout of my concertina before going to pre-print.